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A day once lost,
can never be found
The amendment of thus,
need be swift and complacent
Dismissal to repent,
shan't draw you, a gallow's fate
But in ages to come,
the past you shall hate

Reviews

[Lonely Scorpio Girl]

Beautiful write. Some may not repent for the mistakes they made in the past, but it will haunt them into the future.

[thebendywitch]

Very thought provoking...and paradoxical...while hating the past you are losing time in the present...yes very nicely done.

A positive strong write, to look to the future. A new day, a new start...

Short and with much to ponder about, nicely done.

- Elisa