Emotional Crease

I wrote this a few days ago and am just now getting the chance to upload it. I think it's rather nice.

Melancholy promised me

a heart

it looked me in the eyes

and told me I would

                LOVE

 

So what is eternity

while your feet hit the glass

and your eyes are the equivalent of stars

I Wish My Hands

 

could trace your face

Feel the soft skin of your neck

were we promised?

Or are we as dry as a political debate

 

the only look in your eyes

One of Despair and hate

I’m Trying to Save You

Author's Note

everything here is intentional

Reviews

[soliloquy]

Again...very poetic and this one makes the reader want more....that is the definition of good poetry.

[kera moondust]

Thank you. =) lol I like this one as well, it's one of my shorter poems though this is for sure. =)

[soliloquy]

You seem to know your self well? That is rare for most.

[kera moondust]

I think I know myself very well. =) Do you know yourself well?