The nowhere

Everything was slowed down, I lived the moment as if it was a year and the gruesome thoughts within me were passing by ever so slowly, stabbing me in their way and my scream took a day to end, but it didn’t, I cried and screamed as the devastated memories destroyed my aged mind, and years passed until my screams died out. The vile watched carefully as I suffered endlessly and with a gesture from his heretic hand, I fell on the ground, I was breathless and resistless. He moved closer to my inanimate body, tracing my wet cheek and picked me up to the nowhere. I realized that the years I spent in suffering, they were only a mere moment.

Author's Note

Sorry for my English ^^

Reviews

[Laura Lynn]

I wish I could have a second chance at love. I am so confused about my life right now and I have no idea where to go from here. Sometimes I just want it all to end. I do not know where to go from this point in my life now that love has failed me.

[Kira]

you will find it one day ^^, just be patient and it takes time to find the one~

[Jenny]

Don't apologize for your english. it's fine and your writing is amazing. I love how you manipulate time in your writing and you use it to effectively add to the character of your piece. Thank you for sharing!

[Kira]

Aww, thank you ^^

[Jenny]

you're welcome ;)

[lua]

this poem holds a tortured being, filled with such an intense pain as a reader i feel so much commiseration for the narrator

[Kira]

thank you ^_^