Confused much?

Read between any known lines to understand

I’m just a boxer tryna think outside the “box”
My mind in water reminiscent of eroding rocks ( don’t drown)
Bouncing in my head, Ricocheting my thoughts
I then create casualties
Thinking like I, stinging like bees
My thoughts are butterflies (HA!)  
Floating in this  sky
Walking on ROY G BIV, With skittles I my pockets
Thoughts from N.A.S.A blasting off like rockets
They Are of alien kind
Are the thoughts in my mind
Think of my thoughts as flying pigs
Thinking of a frozen hell, and cancer less cigs
Now my thoughts give the pad full body handshakes
As I’m trying to avoid chronic headaches
And they never sleep, so my bed aches
Soo if my thoughts owned eyes they would have rags beneath them
My thoughts are my sword, its time to unsheathe them



Are u confused?

             Kevon Crute

Reviews

[Cece]

metaphors are cliche's
symbolize touche's
no not confused
if you know where
and what the cliche's are
clay before ali
such fun to read

[K C Scott]

I want to say I get it, but I don't. Seems like its on the tip of my tongue though. What sticks out to me is "Think of my thoughts as flying pigs thinking of a frozen hell and cancerless cigs." Flying pigs and a frozen hell symbolize something that won't occure, or even exist; like cancerless cigs, but I don't have the words to attach it to your thoughts.
Anyway, good write!

[Wildfleour]

Not confused, just in admiration that a young man can write so well. Bravo!