Again, that Sound.

Sounds so nice when its unheard.

You hear it again, that sound..

is it rain hitting sidewalk, 

or something more profound.

It could be a ticking clock.

The swish of wind brushing your ear.

Maybe life's beautiful narration.

It is nothing you should ever fear.

Something with a good vibration..

It always goes unnoticed,

because its rather expected.

Even if its the sound that is closest

A sound you left rejected. 

You can not tell

if it is harsh or soft

A sound you repel

no matter the cost.

This sound is unheard by you

And how I echos for me

How could you begin to construe

what is this sound suppose to be?

It seems this sound only I hear

The sound may be weak..

but it has a voice that is clear.

The voice that I speak.

Author's Note

I have problems with grammar however, I do not mind correction. This is because I believe in learning from your mistakes; even though sometimes we sometimes make those mistakes more then once.

Criticism is appreciated as long as you are not out rightly downing my skills as a writer. I would hope you to think the same.

Reviews

[Amber Lily]

I believe the point of the poem is always great than that of the grammar, everyone makes grammar mistakes :)

This poem has fantastic flow, it all came together nicely. I love the rhymes and the topic of the poem is very interesting. There are sounds we hear on a daily basis and give them no mind, but your voice is a sound that you should always feel confident in hearing, no matter how small! :)

[Stephen]

I really enjoyed! You definitely had me hooked. I really wanted to know what the sound was. Very good poem. Thanks for sharing

[Valentine]

I really like the idea of this write. Walk outside on a warm sunny day and what do most people hear? Nothing! Yet if they took the time to really listen they would hear the birds, the wind playing a melody as it blows through the trees etc. Valentine

[Mr_M]

Logical thinkers can sort out the grammar. But there would be no grammar to correct if people like yourselves do not create such works. Inventing something out of nothing is far more important. Great poem.

[Ashadan]

i truly like the content of it.

The swish of wind brushing your ear.
Maybe life's beautiful narration.
It is nothing you should ever fear.
Something with a good vibration..

i could hear the sound inside the poem . Thanks for sharing

[closed]

I like this poem
from my point of view, i think it's saying how alot of the times the author downplays his own voice

when writing a story you have to have a strong voice in order to convince the reader that the story is worth reading so to speak

as writers were constantly striving for our own voice in our stories/poems

and those of us who find it I think are the luckiest



-Dream

[DoormanDan]

I'm going to start off by telling you that I am not the kind of writer that focuses entirely on the grammar of a poem rather than the content, for I feel it isn't right to do that.

As far as the poem goes, it is quite good, really. None of the rhymes seem forced at all, you picked the right words to use at the right moments, and they really add to the overall atmosphere of your poem, and I personally love it when writers use colors on their work, it really makes it more enjoyable to read(especially to me because I'm an ADHD head). I don't understand why this hasn't gotten ANY reviews yet, but I'm going to try and change that for you. Fantastic job! :)

[KevyyCatalyst]

Thank you very very much!