my right

my right

A Poem by Kiari Sabon
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pissed

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Slash cut sloter kill them kill them all!!! Drain them of their hellish blood. Stake their hearts. Pluck their eyes. Hand them behead them. Kill them kill them all!!! Death and sloter shall be there fall!!

 

 

© 2011 Kiari Sabon


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Again, a few spelling errors. I think this piece would be really nice if you cut it up and put it on different lines (just a suggestion) and aslo the "Hand them behead them." Part I dont really understand...and Im a very dark person haha. But still, good work and keep it up.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Again, a few spelling errors. I think this piece would be really nice if you cut it up and put it on different lines (just a suggestion) and aslo the "Hand them behead them." Part I dont really understand...and Im a very dark person haha. But still, good work and keep it up.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Reminds me if Assassins Creed 1-brotherhood and the song I will not vow by breaking Benjamin I feel the anger coming off of the story like the flames of a newly ignited hearth good job

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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 Added on May 4, 2011
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Kiari Sabon
Kiari Sabon

morehead, KY



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Im broken its as simple as that but it seems all writers have seen the darkest and brightest moments being able to capture the hearts of so many. I can't bring myself to talk to those i should but whe.. more..