broken

A Poem by Kiari Sabon

broken in and out parts of me fall every where i go im broken yet i have to keep helping others so i never have the time to fix myself so whos going to fix me

© 2011 Kiari Sabon

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Chris

Kiari... I saw the other review... may I ask you to visit my "Freefall..." please?... Our poetry is as WE want it. Our words, format, place... each silent scream, each lil cut, the taste of hell and any brimstone we conjure within our flayed being. Broken IS a way of life - for some... it beats empty all to hell.

Take care,
Chris

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Chris

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RedInk524

Good, but you may want to rearrange it into stanzas. A paragraph isnt a poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Added on June 29, 2011
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Kiari Sabon

morehead, KY

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Im broken its as simple as that but it seems all writers have seen the darkest and brightest moments being able to capture the hearts of so many. I can't bring myself to talk to those i should but whe.. more..