She is the dark

She is the dark

A Poem by M.Kilani

 

She is the dark where I hide from the sun

She is where I belong

Where unseen is the undone

Where silence is a song

 

She is the dark where I stay awake

Where my nightmares grow old

Where I dream of what I forsake

Where the sun is never cold

 

She is the dark where I never fall asleep

Where I’m always left alone

Where no one hears me weep

Where I await for another dawn

 

She is the dark

Where burns my cigarette

And empty is my cup of coffee

Where dismay I forget

Where I am truly free


She is the dark

Where I gaze into her black hair 

Where darkness makes a shield

Where her breath is the air 

and her eyes are the fields


She is the dark

Where no sense makes sense

A star upon an ark

And still I can’t confess

That she is the dark


© 2011 M.Kilani


Author's Note

M.Kilani
Reviews are welcomed .
She is the dark II http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Kilani/642761/

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wow, great lyrical quality, depthfully charged theme of darkness,
in many ways creates a vision of the night sky, or a moonless midnight
and written quite clearly in grammar, a fun and polished poem that i'd
easily give a 100 for the way you polished the messege presented
with consistant imagery and tone, awsome job, kep it up.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

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