What's wrong?

I'm just having a crappy year.

What's wrong? They ask me.

As if I know.

Anything I can do to help?

Yeah, just get the f**k away.

Can't you see I don't want your f*****g help.

I don't need or want it either.

Nor do I  want you to hold me in your arms and tell me it's alright.

I don't want you to try to put a smile on my face.

I just want to be left alone.

In my own misery.

So just back the f**k away.

The further you get.

The easier the departure will become.

So stop asking, "What's wrong."

'Cause I'll just f*****g pass it off.

Author's Note

I suck, eh?

Reviews

[DeathByChoice]

I think it's wonderfull. It's true and full of passion. It may not be written like your average poem, but different and new is just as good as normal.
Good luck wiht your writting!

[R.D.Scott]

It doesnt suck actually, I like the level of anger in this piece although im not sure the language is needed, but thats just me, but its a true emotional piece, and you cant go wrong when your being honest.

[Victoria simply]

pure honesty.
love it