Hope.

Nothing.
There's nothing,an absence.
An abyss, a void.
Shades of black envelope
Our world, with sprinkles of hope,
Dotted among the dark.

Although the darkness is everywhere,
So isthe beauty.
An ocean of light reflects
An ocean of light
In a world of nothing.

The darkness hides our sounds,
The world becomes silent.
A crackle of life breaks through
The hush.
But dies as quickly as it lived.

But when all life is unapparent,
Unseen, a fire rises, burning in a thunderous
Applause.
Releasing this world from it's
Prison of darkness.

The world awakens, life
Springs from every valley and
Crevice.
Greeting this fire with love,
Erupting in colours of joy.

Hope covers the world once more,
Living to it's potential,
As if it knows, soon the fire
Will be gone.
Living won't be an option after.

Author's Note

Not my best, but be as honest as possible.

Reviews

[Rahul]

Last month i thought about the same tittle to write and i did start but i could complete because i got not much ideas and words to write. This write seems to be inspiring me a bit because it's a same as i thought about hope at an extent. In everyone's life Hope creates a role and how we move along and include ourself with this role depends on us and depends upon our thoughts.
you left again here powerful thoughts. I seemed you got nice way to elaborate your way.

[Firefly]

Thank you so much :D

[Rahul]

love you so much :D

[InsanityWriter]

Powerful. Great poem! I liked this one a lot! ^_^

[Firefly]

Thank you :D

[Saint No-One]

I actually thoroughly enjoyed this. The use of metaphor was excellent and the poem drags you along at a franetic pace. Great work. Although the word envelop does not end with an E.

[Firefly]

Thank you :)

[Lexi Villanueva]

It's pretty gud It's vidi and has that type of feeling were u can actually see it happening awesome job.

[Firefly]

Thanks :)

[DarkRainbowPie]

You word your poetry so well, it's superb. The way you put things... there's a beautiful quality to them. Wow, well done and well written :')

[Firefly]

This is my favourite poem that ive writtten :) so far amyway :3 thank you :D

[DarkRainbowPie]

No problemo :')

[Jenna]

A crackle of life breaks through
The hush.
But dies as quickly as it lived.


I really liked those lines. Very vivid and mysterious. Almost like you are supposed to whisper those lines, like they are sacred.