Voice

A rhyming poem

Voice.

 

I've cried myself to sleep,

I've told myself don't weep.

I didn't listen to the voice who told me that.

Although it should have been the right thing to do,

I only thought I wanna be with you.

I'm gonna count to ten and breath slow,

Only so my eyes won't show.

I'm gonna rely on the few persons that I love,

so I will soon be above.

That voice I should have listened to,

Was silenced by my love for you.

 

-Kimberley-H-

Author's Note

* Thanks for reading,please comment, critique*

Reviews

[M. E. Lee]

It is so pretty. So simple yet so powerful.

[cquig]

Great Poem. There's a lot of feeling in there. I sure felt it!

[MNeilsen]

Beautifully written. Being seperated from those you love, be it by death or unavoidable circumstances, is painful. Your words make the reader feel that pain.

[Dominic Rosales]

Nice poem, once again beautifully written. I would like to see more of your work, and if you would like, you are invited to my group The Dark Hearted. If you join, I would be delighted to post your poems or stories. Thanks for hearing me out and thanks for sharing