Martyr

A Poem by BlakHeart

Created by a broken heart

It herts to see you with someone new

But then again it felt very odd

For I was happy for you

But maybe this is the will of God

To let me see you with someone new

I will keep the pain to me

For I knew I was not for you

And let it just be

© 2016 BlakHeart

Author's Note

This is my first poem and I would like to know your reaction

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James

I really like it. the rhyming and meter is nice, it flows really well. I'm not sure of the title though. I didn't get the feel of martyrdom. It was more of a feeling of accepting the situation and coming to terms with fate.

Very nice.

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

Thank you :D

barleygirl

Good poetic structure and your message is something we can all relate to. I think "martyr" is a bit harsh to label this narrator . . . I see this more as a loving gesture of acceptance, a journey we have all had to make, when we can't be with the one we love.

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

thank you :D

LapseOfMind

Nice rhyme scheme, good meter and definitely relatable. Good job!

Posted 9 Years Ago

9 Years Ago

Thank you :D

Zaliodir

Ito ay isang napaka-gandang tula, at ako nagustuhan ito lubos ng maraming. Mahusay na pagsisimula sa mga tula, Ako ay nasasabik na basahin ang iyong iba pang mga poems. Paumanhin kung ang aking tagalog ay hindi masyadong mabuti.