Our Way

A mother writes a song for her child, so that he can remember what matters in life.

Beauty,
Love,
Life... Bountiful beauty in grace.

Dance,
Experience,
Love... through the days

Filling,
Seeing,
Life... in your embrace

Understanding,
Obtaining,
our path ...our own way.

Author's Note

Okay I tried... I can only hope this helps

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

Annar,
Your mind, heart, and soul have succinctly captured and composed the very essence of the wonderment and tenderness a mother feels and wishes to share with her beloved child.
I really love it, and I would love it all the more with a lovely Free Verse structure … let me illustrate for you what I mean:

Beauty,
love,
life … splendor in grace.

Dance,
experience,
love … through the days.

Filling,
seeing,
life … in your embrace.

Understanding,
obtaining,
our path … our own way.

I truly enjoyed this, Annar, and love the imagery and feeling of emotion it inspired in this olde bard's heart; had I such a mother I might have turned-out to be a better man and found a more meaningful path to follow … thank you, My Fine Fellow-Texas Friend! ⁓ Richard

[annalysiar]

You are not alone there friend. I am learning from being a mother thanks for the tips when I do the ode to my son ill keep it in mind😄😉I honestly really appreciate your advice

[Richard🖌]

When I return and see you've actually utilized my advice to improve your work, I'll know I've truly done you a service.
You are most welcome, and I equally appreciate you sharing your fine poetry.
Bless you, Dear Mother! ⁓ Richard

[annalysiar]

Thank you again lol sorry little one is four so little time to show my work. But ill show you you'll see 😉

[Richard🖌]

I mean this work, this poem … LOL!

[annalysiar]

Yes I shall lol

[annalysiar]

Okay I fixed it...i thinl

[Coyote Poetry]

You did very well. Had meaning, reason and you left the reader with hope.
"Understanding,
Obtaining,
our path ...our own way."
I enjoyed the complete poem. Nice flow of thoughts led to good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[annalysiar]

Thank you coyote

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[alifeacoustic]

Very nicely written. Finding your own path is important in life, and a helping hand is always welcome on that journey. Great message.

[annalysiar]

Thank you😆