Missing Him

A girl is in an unstable relationship, but she thinks he loves him and that he loves her. These are her thoughts

Missing him, missing you
if only if only love could be true
I sit here wondering, thinking of you.
Blocking out the world; wishing for us two
living on a dream I know
helpless it seams, if only to rue...
Hopeless wonders dance on my mind,
are my feelings returned from you?
pleading, wondering; can it be true..
Is this a dream or a worthless truth?
I sit here thinking
missing, hoping, pining for you.
Missing him, missing you
hopeless wonder, bargaining truth
missing him missing you
Is this Love's one sided truth?
Tell me, tell me-
Do you love me as I love you?

Author's Note

Ladies and gentlemen out there I hear of a lot of heart ache and broken hearts. Remember you are worth it and special and amazing. No matter what others say.

Reviews

[Southern_Writes]

I really enjoyed this piece. For me it called to my nurturing side, the part of me that looks back on a past love and wonders if he moved on. If he has finally found love, or if what we had ruined him. I grew, I learned and I found love, someone able to love my flaws. Was he so lucky, for awhile I knew it not true, all his relationships were left in piles of rubble...but I think often, pray often, for he deserves a love too.

[annalysiar]

I'm glad I reached you and that you enjoyed my poem. You don't know what that means to me. And you're right. Every word is true in both ends

[Rafy T.Nym]

The wonderful thing that caught my attention is the repeatation of words,that actually made the girl's thoughts more 'Thoughtlike'.
A beautiful poem,no doubt!

[annalysiar]

Thank you I'm glad you liked it

[Emily]

Great wording!
Keep it up!!

[annalysiar]

Thank you 😃

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Another good write... you presented the dilemma of love... it can be other way around too....good one

[annalysiar]

I'm really glad you enjoyed it, it means a lot... And you are right love is a double edged sword

[jacob erin-cilberto]

just one edit..."is this Love's one sided truth?"

but otherwise...this poem comes right at the reader...and involves us with its constant questioning.

[annalysiar]

Ooh you are soo right ill fix that right away😲😄

[jacob erin-cilberto]

it's only a question so many of us ask time and again...is the love i am feeling coming back at me with the same force as mine is going out for another.

[annalysiar]

Oh it is and I can hope I conveyed it right... Was there anything I needed to work on??