Nod

Breathing shallow, eyes limp.

I’ve never seen it before.

Life and death and the in between.

It makes you strong he said.

Drink me, eat me, shoot me up.

Put him in the bath tub!

Turn it on cold. 

Wake him up.

He’s going on a nod.

Good night.

Reviews

[paul sal.....]

life and death and everything in between, it's the in between we live and hopefully it lasts a long time, but I guess it's how you spend it. it can be costly.....moving and profound and sad............please smile

[Kimberlee]

Thank you. Most of the poems I write are based on real experiences. I guess this just how I deal with them.

[paul sal.....]

Well, you have taken a very creative way to cope with trying times,much better than some of the alternatives..........hopefully you'll have a chance to write about some cheerful things ( i'd put a smiley face here if I could figure out how to do it on this site)