Warrior

Another 5 minute doodle

Warrior

His heart is filled with compassion and faith in the battle that is to come, he is ready to face any enemy and knows what happens if he falls. He will fight until his dying breath and will destroy everyone that threatens his loved ones.

Soldier

His mind is filled with tactics and strategies for the battles that is before him, he is ready to face an enemy and knows what happens if he fails. He will fight until he is ordered not to and will destroy everyone that he is told to kill.

All warriors starts as soldiers but in the heat of the battlefield the compassion takes an upper hand and a bond is formed between these warriors and they are more than killing machines, they are brothers.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Red]

I think that you have a point here. A warior fights for what s/he belives in. A soildier does what s/he is told. Nice work.

[tonymad11392]

This was very good, there is a lot of depth to this poem and you really captured what it means to be a soldier within your writing

[FocusedAmnesia]

Amazing. I love the format; everything just flows. Powerful subject. written excellently.

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