Forgotten and Unforgiven

J'ai été oublié par tout le monde ...
Pourtant, oublié par personne.
J'ai été pardonné par personne,
Mais pardonné par tous.

Die Welt hat mich allein gelassen
Und gleichzeitig bin ich nie allein.
Genau wie, Ich bin wütend auf die Welt,
Aber wütend auf absolut niemandem.

Але найголо™ніше,
Я була забута, і залишили ™ споко-, а до ™ас ...
І я злюся і не може пробачити тебе за це.
Ніколи ... Ніколи ...

Author's Note

I was forgotten by everyone...
Yet forgotten by no person.
I was forgiven by nobody,
But unforgiven by all.

The world has left me alone
And at the same time I'm never alone.
Just like, I am angry at the world,
Yet angry at absolutely no one.

But most importantly,
I was forgotten and left alone; by you...
And I am angry and can never forgive you for that.
Never... Never...

Reviews

[PaperLife]

I feel the passion as it dances silently in your beautiful words. I've read this poem like 3 times already and just now have I gotten around to reviewing it (i know I suck :P)

You capture with utmost eloquence the contradictions of life and how the angry yet beauty of each moment terryfing and insignificant flow inside of your veins. You speak art and leave no cluttered emotions in the way. Just one pure sweep is left inside of your heart as this poem takes its time to speak what must be told. This is quite beautiful.

Well done.

[that-little-green-monst..]

This is really good! I love the powerful emotions in this poem. It's written beautifully. This one is definitely going in my library!

[Kaylor Mason]

I always, ALWAYS wanted to become fluent in German.

[Pikachu]

This is great. I first pulled it up and was like, "Whoa, I can't read it." Then Srolled down and read it and I was so happy I didn't just click off the page.

Wonderful write. Keep it up! (:

[TawnyBlueStar]

wow :) I like it
its like a nonsense poem XD with feeling :D
really nice poem

[AK]

I don't know the languages in which you wrote the poem so I just read the author's note. That poem was beautiful and had a very distinct style. I loved it. Great job!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Love is love is love in any language, well done, good read! x

[Mockingbird]

interesting how you use three languages to speak to your love. she must be a polyglot too. these are powerful words; you might think they sound better in their native language as they all say, but i find it just as beautiful in english.

[hayleee.]

Wow!! alex, i love this... it makes me feel alot of dark emotions, and i feell as if you had pain whilst writing it... i love it.. good job!
~hayleeee.