Heard the hoofrans scourge automatons Spelunking for splurge in ocular excitation Tiers of cumulated aeons by cloudy blue Here in one wall goon wide flex worked blue
Oh brother, mother, hit slap the radical in Remember me now; now and again The windy ascension blushes us violaceous All anarchists collect violations, scald violaceous
Lines for lonely stigma only natural Jump in the imprint of the other form Gusted on impact to burst of dusty red scold of a mold burns warm like red
I love the depth of this piece. Each line strikes a unique image that let's me travel to places in my mind that are new and different. Poems that make one think or muse are always the best. I really enjoyed this! =) Thanks for sharing!
I like the poem. The strong statements open the door to many places and thoughts. I like poetry that is needed to be took apart to be understood. Strong use of thoughts and language made the poem a pleasure to read. A very good ending to this excellent poem.
Coyote