Be My Secret.

Let’s go find a hotel.

I won’t if you won’t tell.

We’ll shut all the blinds

But we’ll keep on the lights,

Wasting the days and

Devouring the nights

 

…be my secret,

I promise to keep you.

And if we must be discovered,

Let it only be

Under the covers.

 

Reviews

[Edward Clay]

there's a misty, and sly seduction here. which isn't 'seedy' or anything of that nature, but creates a rather pleasant tone. "We'll shut al the blinds ... devouring the nights" is my favourite part, as it's this part that sums up the feelings and tone here.

and it finishes greatly. quite the wit.