First Time Again.

work in progress.

 Never wanna pull the cork

Out of you,

But I wanna be the first

One to pour you,

I think it's fair to say

That you look better each day

And I wanna save you

For the perfect day

 

And the time will

Go on by so fast...

 

But you know

How it goes

When you're having fun.

And I hope

That I'm right

When I think

You're the one,

'Cause I plan 

On being yours

Till time is done.

When you and me

Are seventy

I wanna be there

To get your meds

Before you go to bed

And most of the time

You'll forget who I am

 

'Cause some of the time you'll look at me 

And see me

For the first time

For the first time again.

Reviews

[Legion]

Now that is a beautiful sentiment. Love it. Didn't see what was ahead on this one. Great work.

[Adam Greenfield]

'Cause some of the time you'll look at me
And see me
For the first time
For the first time again.

To be looked at like it was the first time falling in love with someone is perhaps one of the greatest feelings ever. You've captured that desire in a bottle and explained it very well. I really like this one.

[The Poor Man's Poet]

Aaw, you make me look forward to senility.
Putting my teeth in a glass, and wishing
I was young enough to still get a piece of a*s.
this is a good write, the first stanza is great!
I like it alot.