Waiting

Meow

He sits in this room,

With melancholy tears.

It is his fifth birthday,

But no one comes.

He wants his mom to hold him.

But she can't be found.

Ten years later,

He is still waiting for his birthday.

To him,

He is still five.

So he allows the lies to adorn him,

Swallowing him whole.

He is waiting.

Will you come?

Author's Note

Well, I decided to do a boy for you guys out there.

Reviews

[kaylynnmelody♥]

So sad. :/

[TheKaylaPup]

so sad. seems almost like you have a little story developing, at minimum you have written an inspiration for one.

[SilentDreamer]

I really liked this one! A lot. The question at the end is just perfect.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Captures melancholic emotions so nicely here, great work :)

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

this is such a sad, but well-flowing story in here.

[paparapapa]

Really, really sad. Someone open his eyes! The longer you believe on something and then find out that it was actually wrong, the greater is the pain that it will bring. Liked it. Keep on writing! ;)

[alexlessah]

Awwh this is soo sad . .its a good write though.

[Aella.lives]

Goodness, makes me want to pick up that kid and give him a big squeeze.

I think we should throw him a party. ;)

[The Scholar]

Awww this was so sad.
And at the same time, I almost felt like the end was a little haunting.
Nice write!

[KT]

Sweet and sad at the same time. Wonderful job! (And I would come, by the way ;))