Ashes of Angels

I actually made this in the Summer.. Found it last night. Was a song for my band but, didn't work out.

Hands held high,

Stepping close.

Take my hands,

And we'll dance alone;

To the sweet, sweet song,

That comes to us. 

Once a twilight,

We live alone.

Falling from the sky,

Leaving my flesh to burn.

But I don't care,

Because I know what it is.

Nor acid rain or poison,

And I know It is not rain.

It's the ashes,

Burning hot.

Falling from the angels,

Screaming high.

Slowly floating down,

The ashes of angels.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[kaylynnmelody♥]

this is an incredible poem you have here. thanks for the read request. i dont have any complaints.

[musicfollowsme213000]

Hey cassme

[Aella.lives]

Wow, that was really good. I honestly have an unearthly fascination with angels (I blame the show Supernatural), so I found this quite interesting. It reminds me a bit like an apocalypse type setting. Where the angels are fighting Lucifer and the demons, and then there's death. I can imagine something like this. People coming together, or loved ones, and watching the events unfold. I realize that is totally not what you intended, but of course that is where my mind went. Lovely piece. :)

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

lovely title!

[paparapapa]

Interesting poem. Liked it. :)

[Jenni-Chan]

what is it about. truly.

[KT]

Beautiful! I truly loved it!! :D

[SilentDreamer]

Sweet, well done!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Very nice poem, wonderful feel, tempo and flow it has....great work :)

[13ReasonsWhy]

Amazing!!!