Soul my Sweet

omg I�m such a video game nerd!! XD

I can imagine

This person being real

I can imagine

This person I can feel

I can imagine

This person, though surreal

I can imagine

Cracking open the seal

 

To his life and world

But, but life can’t afford

To dedicate itself to him

Nope, not on a whim

 

He isn’t real

He isn’t right

He can’t touch or feel

Never shall he see the light

 

So, I must move on

My heart should get a rest

He’s just a silly character

In a game with-which I’m obsessed.

Reviews

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very nice imaginery . maybe you should move to the game and be real with him

[Sharpdeath]

I have a very similar obsession. I think that this is very beautiful, and the fact it's about my favoorite game in the world makes it even better. The only thing I see that's a bit strange is some overuse of vertain phrases, but that's all I see that's a little off. ^^

[Jillian Alexis]

Now that is Poetry Dianne! To write so beautifully and eloquently about a character in a video game, only proves the talent you possess. This is simply stunning. You go girl!...LOL...Hugz...Jillian

[Michael Lopez]

who doesn't like zelda
personally i love "link 2 the past" the best
great write

[G. Harrison Quay]

As you can probably tell from my writing, I love lyric poetry. I don't care whether the hero is real or not, it is plain you are a loyal fan, and loyalty is in small supply these days.
Very well conceived and presented. I loved it and will be adding it to my library.

[Sarah]

Addiction to a fantasy- how much better it seems, to love what cannot possibly hurt you! But it is more than that, I think. Link, Aragon, Zelda, Arwen-- whether they are in games or stories, heroes call to the best parts of us-- reminding us what it means to be honorable and true. Your videogames, my novels; these characters are defining pieces of our lives, whether that makes us slightly nuts or no!

A beautiful piece of nerdiness you've got here. Write on!

[April Child]

I'm wondering which game it is that got you so obsessed, probably best I don't know I don't have time for another obsession :) I can totally relate to this, thing is these cartoon characters have got real people behind them so it is easy to get attached to them. Nice write.

[Cassandra Holeyfield]

Interesting i like it but i think u took the rhyme a little over board but im not one to talk although i cant relate i like it good write