Sea of Tears

Words from another can cut your heart like a knife

Dip drop. My tears hit the floor. To many to count and more than I can afford. I'm always saying I will be strong and I won't cry but this past year has really changed my life. Explaining the story is one thing, understanding is a different field. I would like to think that I have a good grasp on my problems but in reality life moves like an ocean. Sometimes you can ride the waves, other times you get drowned by sorrow and despair in the pit of the ocean's’ depth.

Crying has never been my thing till recently. I have watched so many people leave and never look back, that it feels like my heart is going to crack. Not just this but I have learned that love is not pure as the saying goings. Love can be painful and cruel even if it is the thing that keeps me going. It's more so words and action than love itself, because oh how cruel humans actions can be. We never truly think because we speak.

The pain of the words from another is why I write this now. For someone I love dear has thrown me down. Not by actions, oh no, but by words that lingers in my heart like a ghost. I try not to cry but the pain cuts deep and before I know it my eyes are a sea.

Author's Note

Ignore grammar mistakes

Reviews

[Rachel McLean]

Oh wow, I really love your choice of words. This, in my opinion is a perfect example of short but sweet, even though the story itself is about sadness. Normally I have a very small attention span so it's hard for me to finish a lot of things, but this was amazing from start to finish. The only thing I can possibly find wrong is grammar mistakes, but they're easy to ignore.

[Kittyskittles]

Thank you very much! As for the grammar mistakes, I know. Like many writers I make a lot of grammar mistakes but this site is where I just want to express myself and write freely so I don't pay attention to grammar mistakes. However I do go back and edit them every now and than. Thank you for the sweet words though.

[Rachel McLean]

No problem. Just being honest.

[Kittyskittles]

I know and I appreciate it.

[closed]

words are one of the most powerful weapons in this world
its amazing how they can be used to build up or tear down

as a writer i'm always learning to how to best use my words

maybe we can all learn to use our words for good


and when we're hurting
use our words...

our pen...

to start anew again



-Dream

[Kittyskittles]

It really is. Someone can mean one thing but the way they word it could mess everything up and they could end up saying something different then what they meant to/

That's a good goal, to learn to use your words as best as you can.

Also I love your saying " And we're hurting
using our words...
our pen
to start new again.


Very nice

[closed]

thank you

that expresses what i meant to say exactly

[Kittyskittles]

It's amazing oh words that sound the same can mean something totally different. As a writer this is something I feel like we could use to express our stories and such. The words are just as strong as the pen

[closed]

that's whats kool about writing
is that you can shape words to mean what you want

read morethat's whats kool about writing
is that you can shape words to mean what you want

it makes for endless story possibilities
and more...

[Kittyskittles]

I agree writing is cool. Writing opens up so many doors and feels free.

That you can