A Day With You

Here’s an attempt of mine on a love poem. Hardly anything to speak of but I want to add in something more lively than the stuff I usually upload here.

Come around darling, 
we’ll stay for a day.
I’ll try to be charming,
if not, I’ll like you anyway.

I’ll try to avoid a trite cliche,
such as going to a cafe.
Instead I want you for myself,
but stay away from by bookshelf.

Reviews

[S. Meijin]

Good title and in my opinion it can still be developed better. Anyway,love how you just make it short and simple.