Words spoken

They left you lips in haste
The taste of bitter anger left upon them
Both of us where thinking them
But it was you who spit them out
The words where spoken
Anger rushed over me
I agreed
Once the words are spoken you cant reclaim them
They hang in the air for all to see
These are the words that where spoken
It cant be changed it cant be undone
These are the words that cant be reclaimed
Though i would like nothing more to forget the words that where spoken
I cant and wont forgive you for you spoke the words that where both on our minds
Your lips are connected to your Heart
you ment what you said
Words cant be unspoken
Though i would like nothing more for your words to disappear
For them to go back into your mouth
But words cant be unspoken

Author's Note

I. Apologize for any grammar errors or spelling errors m still currently editing this poem in not quite where i want it but wanted suggestions. Please write a review i like constructive criticism so dont be shy.

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

Okay - you are asking the right person, as I am the notorious grammar girl - anyhow, first line your, and you have where in place of were on lines 3, 5, and 16 - can't doesn't have an apostrophe in either place and neither does won't - meant is misspelled. Overall it is a really strong piece and just needs these minor corrections to make it work.

[Kt k]

Thanks for the help i will be sure to make the changes i have lots to learn in the grammatical department of writing. Thanks for pointing them out for me i appreciate it a lot.

[A.M. Victoria (LostWrit..]

You make a great point in this poem: "words can't be unspoken." If only people could know and understand this before they say them, we'd have a much better world. Good use of emotion, and well done.

[Kt k]

Thank you for the feedback i apreaciate it. :)