You made me

Please give me feedback anything is helpful especially constructive criticism

You eye looks over me in a glaze
I am invisible to a naked eye
Seen only through a glass eye
You expect me to be a certin way
You judge me to be what im not
I act the way you expect
The way i am not
this is the lie you judge me to be so
this is the lie you made me into
I am what you saw through you hazy eyes
i became what you expected
Your judgement is my cruel reality
i am what i am not
For what you see is a lie
But even the lie you can not see

Author's Note

If u judge me to be a certain way i will act the way you want me to be this is what i was trying to explain in this poem but i am not fake

Reviews

[Robert Price]

I really like this :-) Very powerful. Creative and lots of heart. Good job!

[Kt k]

Thanks for taking the time to read my poem and then right a review It means a lot

[Lyn Anderson]

I really like this poem - I assume the use of the I verses i is to emphasize your point. If it is not, it definitely comes across that way.

[Kt k]

Yes i was trying to emphasize the point across but now looking back onto this poem i think i might make some minor line changes for i fell as if i repeating the same stuff over and over again thank you for the feed back and your interpretation of the poem.