Feel Your Love

I just want to feel your love
I am tired of feeling like I am
still on my own

 

I need you but your never around
I like to hear your voice but it is
drowned out by the ocean

 

I wish there was one simple potion
that would send you to me, I want
to be happy

 

I call you but it can be unpredictable
will you answer or will I just hear the
machine

 

I feel weak whenever I cry, I just want

to be strong for you and I, but I lost it

when the time flew by

Reviews

[murrill]

My life all over great wrighting

[Tai Ryens]

The insecurity or longing, not sure what word to use, is expressed skillfully here. Especially the last two stanzas, those were overflowing with emotion.