Kiss List

You made yourself a kiss list
a sort of wish list if I say so
myself

You think it smart
to play with others
hearts

a simple kiss to you
could turn another
blue, so I say this with
love; shame on you

You think love is just
fun and games when you
think your on top, your
not even that hot

Put your schemes behind
or you will find life is very
cruel, your way of thinking is
so old school and you look like
a complete fool if I say so myself

Reviews

[VertoAtrum]

Besides the fact that "your" is used many times where "you're" should have been, I like it.
My favorite part has to be:

a simple kiss to you
could turn another
blue, so I say this with
love; shame on you

It flowed very well, and was interesting to decipher.

[Crazy Cat Man]

i know so many people like this. thats why i bash em with my poems :) great little piece

[K-mo]

haha thanks, after I wrote it I thought it kind of sounded like something you would write!