Want My Mind Back

We went our seprate ways today
I don't know if I will ever be okay
the way I see the world so gray
I want you to pay for the way
you tore out my heart I can still
feel the pain: it smarts to the
touch I hope the pain will eventually
wain

You left as if on a runaway train
and my mind went along for the
ride, it's the same old story
that I heard so many times
I don't want to hear it, don't make
me hear it

Give me back what was mine
I want it back, I hope that
it's at least some what intact
I can deal with a few cracks
I just want what is rightfully mine
give me back my mind

Reviews

[Rob Santana]

Great write, I especially like the last 3 lines,awesome wording there.

[Kes]

This is so sad. That touch of desperation doesn't go amiss - I love it.
Hope things improve!
K

[XxKooperxX]

very caring and soulful :)

[Steven Cash]

aw breakup Kim?

[K-mo]

something like that

[Steven Cash]

hope all works well soon

and great write

[K-mo]

it's just lingering thoughts on old stuff really

[Steven Cash]

oh ok, gotcha

[K-mo]

mhm it's nothing major

[Steven Cash]

cool then

[K-mo]

yep for sure

[K-mo]

yeah a little rough on the edges but tell me what you think!