Who I Want To Be

Not who you want me to be
never will I be the person you
hoped for and chose to see

I want you to know me for
who I am and hope that one
day you can

I am tired of hiding behind
all the shadows it's time I
come to the light but I
fear it may be too bright

What comfort do I have
in this knowing I am not
who I am meant to be?

What comfort do I have
in this knowing you don't
see me?

Reviews

[Ees]

Lovely work. Sometimes you just have no choice but to come out as your self.
The flow was nice and the sentiments honest!

[K-mo]

I am happy you feel that way:)

[Sami Khalil]

I'm tired of hiding
behind all the shadows.
Nice write.

[K-mo]

Thanks Sami!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.

[Crazy Cat Man]

Its pointless is trying to be a perception of what others think u should be. Its better to be urself and someone should love u for what u are :) great piece

[K-mo]

Your right! Thank you

[Damien Davison]

So intense, I really connected to this. Especially at the end. I feel being medicated makes me someone I'm not... Anyway, nice write!

[K-mo]

Thanks Damien, glad you can relate to this

[Lydia Barrett]

wow you are amazing, love it so.