The Room

Overwhelmed; not a clue where to run

I take a clumsy step forward just to fall

backwards, the room is spinning not sure

if I see it right but there you are, the one

I am thinking of, but there you go as the room

stops its dangerous flight

Reviews

[Nwanna Onyeka Benedict]

Nice piece of writing. Keep on the work

[Lydia Shutter]

Such a psychological riveting write, K-Mo. The imagery is so vivid, I almost felt dizzy as I read it. Lydi**

[K-mo]

I wanted to put it across how sometimes our mind can take us on a rollercoaster and makes us feel a little dizzy

[Lydia Shutter]

Yes, I understood that....you wrote it very well.