Little Toes

a dark poem about toes.

Little Toes

 

I’m going to eat

Your little toes

So yummy

+------Miki(e)angelo

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Well, This little piggy won't get a chance to go to the market...

and this other one won't get a chance to pee all the way home.

but on some people, they are cute.

[knighngale]

hellos, 2 funny, u should publish that, lol, thank you so much dear Jacob

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But I found it cute!Nibbling gently those cute toes....I like to adore small babies:)

[knighngale]

thank you x, me too! :D

[M. J. Smith]

Ha! They never believe... Until it's too late! Well worth two emojis. 😄😄
Loved it.

[knighngale]

thanks M. J. glad you enjoyed it :D

[Chris Shaw]

Ah baby talk. I didn't see this as dark either. It brought my maternal side out. Joyful that was. Delightful brevity.

Chris

[knighngale]

thank you so much Chris, lol, it's very dark, but u have to read between the lines, :D thank you so much again ,:D

[Chris Shaw]

Ha, poetry is so subjective. I see the light, you see darkness :)

[knighngale]

:D most definately honey, :D

[Kelly Scheppers]

I immediately thought of an infant as soon as I read your title, so I don't consider this "dark" poetry. But I will consider the toes of a baby irresistible, just like those chubby legs and cheeks! There's nothing left to do but love this!

[knighngale]

thank you so much Kelly, it is not necessarly, babie toes, but I love to have imagery, :D

[Patricia]

Well I wouldn’t exactly call this dark considering most people want to nibble the niblets of an infant. I used to be a maternity nurse for awhile in my career and I never tired of their cutsie nibs!

[knighngale]

hellos, Patricia, thank you so much for your review. To us it's not dark, but to others it is, :D