Wrong Move

Cant you see

Were all the same

All sitting on the cliff

But the rock is breaking and cracking

Whats left are little edges

Oh wrong move and the blade slips

You cut yourself

And the blood just drip drip away

Now your a lifeless shell

So many bruises and scars

From my past mistakes and regrets

But you cant really judge me

Cause you have plenty as well

So now cant you see

Were all the same

All of us are human

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[ShaneBerry]

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Novelists Elite Member ID: 009
Name: Shane
Username: shaneberry
Novels: Blayders, Element Z
NE Status: Early Reader, Early Writer
Join Date: 03-25-2011

very songish, i am going through your poetry here and i am seeing allot of great work=s bro!!! i love the subtle rhyme scheme in here, its very deep, and thought provoking "oh wrong move and the blade slips" is my fav stanza, very brilliant and gritty imagery here. second poem of yours i have read and i luv it hahahaha!