Live and Die.

When a butterly is created,

does the catipillar die?

I know, in science,

they are one;

destined to live together

forever.

But when one leaves,

and one comes forth,

does that dying creature

have to give up it's life

to help the first one

trapped?

The catipillar,

if this theory proved true,

would be a selfless

hero. Doing what's right

to help the life born

inside a

tarnished soul

as it itself disapears

into heaven's folds;

leaving the butterfly

to take over a new and

beautiful body.

Author's Note

New style I suppose, review and tell me if you like it :) Please, and thank you

Reviews

[Katie Marie]

Kohleen, I love this!!

[Beck Louise]

I really loved this! So well written and beautifully put :)

[eglantine]

Have you read any of Ellen Hopkins books? This structure highly reminds me of her. I recommend you check her out if you haven't.

[Mir]

I love how you took words in the poem and put them by themselves to form a new phrase! This poem was great! :)

[devon]

I absolutely ADORE this writing style. It's genius! The poem itself is beautiful. Very nice job! :)

[Mauricio Montoya]

good start love the concept but somthing is missing only you can fill the gap, keep on wring.

[Mr.Cardigan]

i liked it alot good job

[Kohleen]

Well thanks :)