Sorrow

Another memoir about my adolescence

Tomorrow’s me is surely waiting helplessly for love

Please try to pick up and fix the fragments of my heart

Even if I am with friends or family, I will become lonely

Nothing in this world can full up my heart

The thoughts in my head are too heavy for to bear all alone

I feel dead inside despite my cracked heart beating loudly in my chest

Tomorrow's me would be better if I never existed in this cold scary place

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'Sorrow'
Ji-Suk,
Oh, I appreciate honest portrayals such as yours! It is simply the reality which is where you are coming from. We all have to start somewhere and the use of the phrase 'tomorrow's me' is so telling. For the experiences we have change and we can bring new attitudes and goals into our thinking and bring about a brighter future. Life is really all in how we think- what comes from within and how we process it. Oh Bless you and I know that you are in a life process as we all are. I know that Jesus saved me from the curse of sin and it is only by his grace that I have any peace, joy or love. God is my strength and help in time of need. I wish everyone knew my Jesus and Savior.
Kathy

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thank you for your review. I’m glad that you enjoyed the reality of the poem!

[lightsong]

reading Your two others poems I think it's very normal to feel what You've felt at that time, and I believe You are so brave and have a strong faith, because as a teenager to go with what You've went through and still to believe in Tomorrow, is something remarkable, most teenager fall down without being able to get up.

for Your English, as a Korean I think Yours is very very good, as from what I know their English is not that good as Yours, it's nice to have a Korean friend, I listen to Korean music and used to watch their dramas too, these days I'm bringing back the memories of my past years watching Winter Sonata again :)

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thanks for your kind comment! I actually cried when I read it. Thank you!

[lightsong]

all the smiles for You my friend*** :)

[Coyote Poetry]

When the heart is broke and love is far away. We need and want little. I felt the sadness and the loneliness in the words. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thank you for your kind comment!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[HappySad]

Nicely written. Hopefully I'm not overstepping, but there are a couple things:

Nothing in this world can fill up my heart
&
The thoughts in my head are too heavy to bear all alone

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thank you for your corrections I'll fix them soon c: But I am glad you liked it!

[𝔸ʂɾıéli໐ຖ Ş..]

i like this piece- i can feel the struggle of loneliness and misunderstanding here. the intro of the poem really pulls the reader into your world, with the following paragraph explaining the effects of the loneliness. lastly the desperation of the last sentence sums it all up...

[송지석 / Ji-Suk]

Thanks! I am glad for your nice comment. I am glad you liked it!