Random thought

Motivation

Remembrance of you is but a mere sight,

collected evidence of how you chose to spend your nights.

If fear of the dark invented light,

then it is fear of the world that can bring life.

 

Author's Note

Comments are appreciated.

Reviews

[Crystal Overmeyer-Birmi..]

This is what poetry is suppose to be. Snaps. I really loved the profound way you write, but you're true talent in this one is the how just two sentences can pack such a punch. Awesome

[Amy R]

simplicity at its finest!
love the way you write! :)

[Korin]

Thanks this mean a lot to me :)

[Amy R]

my pleasure :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the way you used the words. You say a lot using the language with skill. You create wish and ending in this poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Korin]

thanks a ton. :) i appreciate this review. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[ANTO]

Necessity is the mother of invention - Fear is probably the auntie that is always in Necessities ear with her doom-laden scenarios so should also be given some credit. You spoke well of Auntie Fear here Korin. Well penned.
:)

[jeannemarie coulter]

interesting concepts well presented

[Korin]

Thanks a lot. i was worried about this i feel like it was rushed when i could have added more to it.

[Katherine P. Haley]

This is very good! I love the concept

[Korin]

Thanks a lot. i'm glad you've enjoyed it :)

[Relic]

~You've stated this incredibly well. ~

[Korin]

thanks a lot :)

[Sami Khalil]

First, darkness is just an absence of light. Fear is an absence of true peace and security. Now there is a reverential fear which respects a Higher power but it is more of a valued respect and appreciation of the Love and blessings of the Divine or the benevolent authority. True love is all embracing while fear is exclusive. I like your motivational thought for it inspired me to share my views...:)..

[Korin]

Thanks. i was looking to inspire some people even if just a few. :)

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome. ....:)....