She with a tin

She kept on the table, a sweet zin
Fight arose among the kin
All started playing a game
It involved the world fame
But this time they played with a tin !!!!

Reviews

[Pushkar Prabhat]

this is wonderful..........
can't say about limericks.......do not know.
still i liked it very much.......!!!
:)

[Kousika]

Oh .. Thanks poet..

[Perkele.7885]

I do not see why it would not be so. I think it has all the qualities to qualify. If it feels good to you now, use it. if not, lightly polish but do not rub hard!

[Kousika]

Thank you for encouraging me ... I know it obeys all the rules .. Hope will soon get well versed soon.........

[Kousika]

This is my new limerick .. Does it look so ?? please review it and your suggestion is needed ..