Am I Wrong?

I must question

My own intention

Is it wrong to feel the way I do

What if I am wrong

And ruin our song

Unable to do what I was supposed to

But if notes greet as one

Dance under moon and sun

Then I will know that it is true

Why am I so shy

To face this truth or lie

Hoping hope doesn’t turn blue

Not wanting to offend

I can’t help but pretend
There may be more to you

Like a silent fox
I’ll avoid those talks
Maybe its best you never knew

Reviews

[Kady R.]

Hii Kannneee,

I too am shy and can relate to the things that are left unsaid. I think its wonderful you put so much thought to what you say, its much better to think it out anyways. But I see how its bittersweet in a way because there are regrets to saying the wrong things regrets to not saying anything. I guess its picking your poison and then practicing self kindness afterwards.

Thanks for sharing apart of yourself.
Kady

[Kane Hagwood]

Thank you for your review, Kady. This is an older poem that ended up a little bitter sweet over time, though I don't regret writing it. One of my biggest regrets is that sometimes I silence myself too much, especially when it comes to matters of the heart. Thanks for stopping by :)
-Kane

[Kady R.]

I know what you mean (the silencing of the heart).
It was an enjoyable read for being your older work. Relatable and not at all dated in anyway.
Welcomeee!! 🤗🤗🥰🥰

[Ms claws]

Hi Kane, I like this so much because you speak to the many questions most of us have when we are secretly interested in somebody. I suspect you were reaching for the rhyming mostly but it turned into a lot of wisdom!

[Kane Hagwood]

Hey, thanks for stopping by and leaving a review!

[Sk.Mansur]

What a poem that you wrote, it is really beautiful , i really enjoy your poems

[Kane Hagwood]

Sorry for the late reply, but thank you for the kind review!

[Ken Simm.]

I really enjoyed and empathised with this romantic write. Beautiful.

[Kane Hagwood]

Thank you for stopping by for the review, Ken. I really do appreciate it :)

[Chris Shaw]

Enjoyed the read. Shyness can be such a curse. Especially if others are shy too. A sprinkling of courage can be a blessing. Nicely composed poetry.

Chris

[Kane Hagwood]

Thank you for stopping by to review, Chris. And you're right: shyness can be a curse. I'm still waiting on my own sprinkling of courage, which may require some time.

[Chris Shaw]

Ask Santa nicely :)

[Kane Hagwood]

I'll be sure to put courage (or perhaps my crush) on my list, and make sure to leave out extra cookies and milk as a bribe haha!

[Chris Shaw]

Yep and a carrot for his reindeer :)

[W. Barrett Munn]

An interesting choice of rhyme scheme and well handled


Winston

[Kane Hagwood]

Thank you for the review, Winston. It's always appreciated :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I like "if notes greet as one"--Sharp line there.
So often the Fox really wants to communicate to us, but they are such shy animals.
Humans can be just as shy.

[Kane Hagwood]

Thank you for your kind words. I really struggled to get the right words out. And I'd have to agree with you about foxes generally being shy creatures. It's always appreciated knowing I got to share my poetry with someone else :)

[Stu. T.H.]

That sentiment, to love without hoping for love in return, is to me -- even now -- very strange, even if it occurs so often. Emotionally weighing, the uncertainty flavoured with loving passion decorates the poem as a great piece to read and relate to at times. Thank you for sharing your work, author Kane Hagwood.

[Kane Hagwood]

This has been a very strange year for me. At this point, whatever happens, happens. I've just had a lot of questions, for others and myself, I don't feel like I know how to ask. Thanks for stopping by, Leon :)

[living lavender]

love the possibility this piece portrays.
hope dripping like honey off every word.
{captivating wordplay.}

[Kane Hagwood]

Thank you, Lav. This was a weird poem for me to write, though was somehow some of the most honest poetry I've ever written. Even if the words themselves convey confusion. I always enjoy hearing your thoughts on my work :)