Our Sin

Just casually getting all my feelings out.

You’re out of time

and have nowhere to hide.

Your lies and deceit

now lay open for all to see.

I have my own sin

it shall do me in.

I have no reason

to be pure again.

This will be the last time

for both you and I.

So say goodbye to the dark world

you’ve seduced and lied.

My heart was never known,

by my house or my home.

It will never miss me.

I have no parting words for it.

Now lay beside me,

for our eternal sleep.

The final round will soon begin.

The finale: facing our sin.

Author's Note

Constructive criticism welcomed.

Reviews

[Xardalas]

I enjoyed reading it. I don't read a lot of poetry though, so i'm afraid that I can't offer anything in the constructive criticism.