I AM FINE

I AM FINE. Make the invisible, visible.

I have lost myself.

Anger, hatred, and regret burn within me.

My dreams have all shattered into the darkness

Free me, please

I cannot escape this

Nightmare.

Eternal darkness dwells within me.

Author's Note

Constructive criticism welcomed :)

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Reviews

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

hmm perhaps maybe you can make lines that begin with those letters that would go with subject you are trying to get across, but that's just my opinion.

[Kris]

What do you normally do when a friend of yours is feeling down?
/You go a bit deeper/

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

hmm...so the reader has to dig deeper? xD I'm kinda confused but yeah you find out whats bothering them

[Kris]

Like, I really don't wanna give it away, but how would you read a hidden message if there was one? How would you make a hidden secret visible?

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

haha oh i see xD makes since now lol

[Kris]

:D

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

lol clever stuff