My Glimmer of Hope

I was feeling down lately and not myself. So, to counter, well more like to amplify that feeling, I wrote this.

I've never realized what my life was to me.

I lost that hope long ago.

I became lost and numb to the world that was my pride,

and I was sick, tired, and all alone.

I did not want to try anymore.

Then I saw that hand that had been the first held out to me.

And, as I looked up, I saw you,

my Glimmer of Hope.

Author's Note

Constructive criticism welcomed.

I wanted to get that feeling out. Let me know if I achieved it, please. Thank you.

Reviews

[writingurl14]

you deffently got the feelings out.... and i think it is a great poem... i really enjoyed reading this.

[Dr. Wood ?]

it should be ' I lost that hope long ago' but other than that it was very touching...We all see things differently it is good that you write them down