The point of no return

inspired by intuition

suppose

suppose this world 

all of your memories

all of your dreams

all but what it seems

is destined to be sucked in

by something whirling

just like gravity pulls in

and that, in an autumn season

wouldn't you cave in?

wouldn't your breath stop to reason?

Author's Note

Thanks for reading.

Reviews

[Acropolix]

I believe this to be the point at which humanity is set for a new destiny, a new start but with modern settings. The day we lose our knowledge of a thousand generations but the traces of its craftmanship still on our hands. I think breath wouldn't stop to reason, but reason would stop breathing.

[Dayran]

It is a dream with everyone to create the world exactly the way they want it. Perhaps what you refer to is the opportunity for us to realize that its so.

[Shubham's View]

Beautiful timing the poem comes in, sets the cogwheels of thoughts in motion! Thank you for sharing it! Beautiful write!

[DeliriousCerises]

I feel like I'm taking this too literal, but I think chaos would ensue. And from chaos is born order, and everything would be alright in the end... On another note, I really like the structure of this poem, it's very simple but pretty, like a wisp of smoke dancing in the breeze. Like a thought that came into your mind that demanded to be written before it vanished.

[Kruppz]

"Like a thought that came into your mind that demanded to be written before it vanished." Exactly. And I'm glad you like it.