A square poem

Inspired by Lewis Caroll

life    is          a    mystery

is    love          bird    unfurling

a    bird             within    thee,

mystery  unfurling  thee,    darling?

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Shubham's View]

The stanza's really good, but my question is the shortening of poems is deliberate or did you hit a writers' block?

[Kruppz]

I'm not sure if it's the writer's block but I wanted to try a square poem..it was difficult for me.

[Dayran]

More tea darling?

[Akshat♥]

It seems like L I V E...
Short and sweet :)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Very creative...great work :D

[Kruppz]

Thanks :)