Chasing Horizon

An attempt at writing song.

Another day
Another sight
There's sunshine
Everything's alright

Another plan
Another way
There's promise
I'm living with grace

Still I'm counting the days
Waiting for the end of this phase
'Cause I've been longing for depth
Long since life was in my breath

I've been chasing horizon
Horizon after horizon...

Author's Note

Thanks for viewing. Readers, please suggest if I should complete this one.

Reviews

[Shubham's View]

You record your thoughts in a small ledger I presume? Almost immediately?

[Acropolix]

I sense a 'loving and cheerful' tone and melody, but the contents is more bitter aiming for the hardships in life. I hope you will end this song! I like the part so far.

[Kruppz]

I don't see hardships as hardships but it's important for me that what i do is in some way serving my higher purpose. It's like I accomplish something in the eyes of people but at the end of the day what matters is whether your inner self is satisfied. Still you have to continue to do what you've initiated until you finish so you become kinda helpless since you realize you're not really going anywhere.

[Dayran]

A life lived with changes brings many new experiences. It convinces us that we have choices.