rebirth

I got wings

this commencement of a transition

a metamorphosis

a re-birth

flying out the abyss     

i'd been half-consciously fallen in          

Author's Note

open for interpretation

Reviews

[Seshat Nidaba]

I like the sensations of this, I often try to imagine the process of reincarnation, at at least, death - as a way to acess different levels of consciousness, but what would consciousness be like without a brain? Lovely work.

[Tai Ryens]

You've got a really creative mind that thinks deep down. I wonder if it means 'rebirth' as in rebirth of our mentalities, as in a complete change of our character, or 'rebirth' as in a literal rebirth of our human bodies. Great job on this one!

[Dayran]

Things beyond our comprehension are often experienced as magic or a miracle. The work of the metamorphosis is an endeavor of nature. Someday, you may return as the human to it and learn it through reason. A nice poem.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Very deep thinking...

[JayElle Ess]

love the structure of the work. the flow of the words. the rhythm. i've been there. thanks for this.