Betrayal

Betrayal

it seems

it flows

so so naturally

so gently 

like a meandering stream...

it seems

its origin

so unexpectedly

so subtly

lies not in the nib, the fountain;

but in thy fingertips?

but in thy venomous veins?

how can it not betray thee thence?

Author's Note

what do you think it's about?

Reviews

[Dayran]

Because it borrows from its own self, not from the world of experience outside. Its self flattery! Nice write!

[Inyourshadow]

It's about poetry/words the power they have over us, the way they say sometimes the things we never meant to, betraying us by saying out loud what we only meant to think lol. Love the emotion, keep em' coming

[Boldpen]

It was wonderful!
The use of phrases and words was very fine and the flawless spirit of poem made it everlasting one.
Great Job!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

I love it....inherent urges it speaks to me....nonethless, awesome poem.....

[Tai Ryens]

I think it's about our own human mind, it has the power to betray us by commanding us to do something stupid, but yet it still gives us the power to control it. Nice poem, I like the use of words in this one.