The 'dot' (.)

Learn to forgive thy self if you have any...

the blood-tainted mirror

showed me an image that lasts...

the half-invited horror

consumed my rose-tinted glass

 

the part of me so familiar

mourns that night every morn’, alas!

the part, new-born and dear

resolves to restore the self-respect at last.

Author's Note

The best part about my poem is the 'dot' placed at the end. The one who could comprehend the meaning of that 'dot'........

Reviews

[Ghostshell]

hm, reminds me of a bloody mirror in my past but i think yours is different. blood and dots make me think of menstruation to be honest...

in any case this was a lovely piece. :)

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This poem displays your masterful use of imagery. The energy travels around in an endless circle. I really enjoyed the theme of creation.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Terrific, complex poetry, love it!!

[Dayran]

Curious in the way you speak of horror on the one hand and stand aside to review the statement with nonchalant best wishes. A line from a movie says, ' we live such pleasant fiction,' and that comes to mind in reviewing such a daring-do of conviction and pathos, of self reflection. Well done!