Insomniac Romance

I think I watched too many romance movies today. 7/16/2013

They said, 

"If you're up at 4am,

You must be lonely

Or madly in love."

 

Am I feeling because it's late,

Or am I lonesomely in love? 

It's her smile that's kept me up,

The giggle won't leave me be, 

It's the most lovely torturery.

Her brown eyes, overwhelming, 

Soft hair endlessly flowing, 

Her presence gives me peace.

My soul craves her touch, 

The feeling of her beside me. 

But here I sit, alone, without her. 

Trapped between passion and desolation,

Her love has captured me, 

Will I ever be free?

Baby, please, will you set me free?

Reviews

[rhythm&blues]

4 AM is always a lonely time no matter if you're in love or otherwise, nice work, although I don't think "torturery" is a word.

[Kupendwa]

That's true, it's not the best time to be awake. You are right, it's not in the dictionary. But sometimes, as a writer, you just gotta go with what feels right.

[Emilyyyyyy]

Poetic license yo.