My love

I can relate to every single word I wrote here, wishing to be with the one I love sooner.

Sitting in my room, watching the rain outside
You always come into my mind.
Every drop hitting my face
I wish to have a cat's grace
To leave my town
Without a sound.
All day chatting with you...
God! Anything I do
To see your beautiful face.
If I would walk, I would change my pace
From walking...
To running...
Every time you say that you're happy
I always think that...maybe
Our date would make you feel great
Even if you would be on a school break.

To finish what I have to say...
In this rainy day...
This poem I'm gonna end
By just clicking 'Send'.

But I still have one thing to do...
Some thing that's only for you...

I wish I could talk 'till the end of day,
But now I'm running out of things to say.
So I'll end by the line you already know
"I love you!" more than what I could show.

Reviews

[Leigh]

Online dating must be a bit of a lottery and the PC aspect must dehumanise the whole thing, typing the letters 'I L O V E Y O U' is not the same as receiving them handwritten in a letter

[TheAdamBryant]

brilliant :)

[Nick.B]

You need to have some guts to use online dating, call me old school, but that feeling of talking to someone face to face, seeing her reaction, the momentum, something that's kind of lost...great poem

[Coyote Poetry]

On-line dating. A scary thing. Real people need a park, library and bar for old folks. A interesting poem. People have tried to discuss things with me. Internet is for writing and create new connections. I like the thoughts and the emotion of love in the poem. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote